DRAGON! I'm so in love with Asher right now! (Well, I actually read the first two chapters on my phone yesterday but I didn't review at all so I'm doing now. :D)

Funny, Asher's afraid of height. :P
I don't really like Medusa. Don't know why. Jason is alright. And I looove the little "b*tch"! And José obviously, he just bears Asher really well. He's so calm around him. I don't think I would have been that calm with Asher. I mean, I think I'm kind of like Medusa (sorry, I forgot her name)! LOL.

Anyway,
See you!
xx

Hey!
I just came across your fiction and I LOVE IT!
Actually, I saw the sequel and I wanted to read the first story but I wasn't expecting something like that! Girl, that I love Asher, some kind of irritating character but so funny! :D
Can't wait the read the other chapters! ;)

See you!
xx

I almost gave up on the story because I found the beginning a bit rushed, but I'm glad that I gave it a second chance. After they lost the other two companions the story got gradually better.

I love this story!

This was an absolutely wonderful story. Exactly the sort of fic I love to read. I loved the mythology and the relationship between the characters. The protagonists were consistent and developed wonderfully. Asher especially. It was a pleasure to read. :)

OH MY FREAKING GOODNESS THAT WAS SO GOOD! That feeling of incredible contentment and insatiable desire for more that you get when you read a fantastic story- I got it. I love the Inception-like twist you threw in at the end; totally didnt see it coming, and it's awesome because I hate when characters die for real, but this way its heart-wrenchingly adorable AND theyre still alive. Brilliant, really. I love that you slowly built up the romance and didnt just let them fall in love all of a sudden. Asher being horny all the time (although incredibly hot) was kind of annoying, just because he would turn a really cute scene into something sexual haha. It did suit his personality though :) ANYWAY! Thank you for sharing your brilliance at writing and I am SO excited for the sequel.

Whoa, hold on... This is the end?

Okay, I love this story. I love José and I desperately want him to make Ash feels like he's worth something... That's why I'm not expecting this kind of ending.

I would be great if you told us what happened to them now that they're home... *hint hint*

Will we ever hear of these two again? A nice, fluffy, happy ending maybe?

AHH! sad ending! why sad... can i say they finally got together in my mind... please!

btw your story was brilliant, you really created some very true to life characters, although I did sometimes get confused with how they found out their info so easily but it was easy to just go with it after a while. Overall Pure brilliance and I am supremely jealous of your talent.

Thankyou muchly for submitting a piece of fiction I truly enjoyed reading

Swag, I've now put you on author alert! For the sequel, that is (Cuz yeah I am interested)

This was a nice chapter, but I wish Asher would just figure it out already. And then he and Jose can make out or something...

XD, but I really really really want them to reunite!

(Thanks for the shoutout, btw :3)

,SGFHDLGNDSFV WHAT? I am going to slap Asher! Nuuuuuuu! *metaphorically dies*

I plan on reading that sequel. I can't live without seeing Asher get his act togther.

I think I'l categorize that part of the story as one of the unspoken thing that happened. Never speak of it again, yeah?

this is disappointing if this is actually the real ending! but hey! whatever floats your boat! just that from the readers perspective, mostly everyone wants a happy ending, plus the smut and heavy sex scenes!

GOD. FUCKING. DAMNIT ASHER. I KNEW YOU WOULD DO THIS. *rampages* *throws a chair*

But... awe...

Holy snap noodles! So you're meaning to say that Asher has to die to get back to Blind Guy? (Did Asher ever even exist, at this point?) And if he has to die to get back, where is he going to wake up? How will Blind Guy and Asher ever find each other again?

...If he was in a coma, did Blind Guy get hard ons when him and Asher were doin' the nasty? Because I read comatose people do that somewhere... lol I wonder how his actionns in the one world affected his body in the hospital bed... *ponders*