Aww, Asher seems kinda messed up now. And lawls to Ruigi :)

"Shit, that was" short! XD

Ahahaha... Asher's such a wonderful bastard. I like him best when he doesn't get what he really wants, hoho~~~

But uuuuuh, I can like totally understand those ladies at the beginning checking out José 8D *starts fantasizing and daydreaming about him* ... *drool*

A-a-aaaanyways: once again a lovely chapter! :'3

José playing the piano! fasjkgfgas! T_T

And: though I like Asher for being desperately horny, I still hope he gets a little less slutty in the future even if it takes like... forever XD"

Aw, dammit, no threesomeeeee D:

... just kidding XD

But army penguins ftw! They just so rule this whole chapter! D

And Fangs seems to be an interesting character, hope he'll have more appearances! :D

(Still wondering if he told the truth about Stone Kid and Medusa or just wanted to suck dragon blood though D")

I get a feeling, they're both idiots 8D (in their own adorable (?) kind of way XD)

But this chapter really has made me fall for José! I love characters like him and that's why reading from his point of view was just great *_*~~~!

One of my favorite parts: "I...have...a name." - "I...don't...care." XD

Just love you for writing such nice smut ;3;~~~ (though the end could have been a bit longer and detailed 8D probably I just didn't want it to end so fast lol)

But the other parts were also really well written and I enjoyed them a lot! :3 Nice action scenes with those harpies and the get-the-herb-from-that-f*cking-hill scenario was just hilarious XD

So. Well. Written. TT~~~

I just love the dialogues of Asher and José D and your sense of humor is absolutely awesome, I think some phrases and scenes are stuck in my weird head forever already xD! (... but I'm too lazy to quote right now "OTL)

Somehow I feel sorry for Stone Kid and Medusa (they had so little "screentime" ;_;") but I still hope they're doin' fine.

And I'm reading the next chapter and looking forward for more Asher/José action now anyways D HOHOHO!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAH, I love the prologue! That was one hell of a nice introduction of the characters there! D Had to laugh out loud at some points for their great way of interacting! XDDD

I'm really thrilled to go on reading! :3

OMG, I was mentioned! My life is now complete :D

Very interesting chapter. The whole 'needles' in your mind thing works very well, and Asher's past is fascinating.

So Foxy can go ahead and sod off. Fangs...eh, he could die or just space out and wander about. I couldn't care less about him, although he annoys me a bit.

Whoops, to the polls we go!

P.S: Super long chappie L.O.V.E

Wow, this is really interesting. Wonder what Foxy wants now...gosh, I sure hope someone kills him and Fang (Err, forgot his real name...Ruigi?) DX, once again, Luvluvluv this story :D

I really hope more of this comes sooooooon :D

waaah! no i want the plushie! do me, do me! XD asher do meeee! :DDD and btw, this chapter has been brilliant. i bet the foxy's lover had been killed by one of the villagers (assuming he was the kind of person Jose was) and he wants revenge by killing everyone in the entire world through love, justice, and fire. Purification much? xD

I have to commend you for updating too. :D Thanks so much! That and the fact that the blind dude AKA Jose is prolly gonna be sleeping wif foxy and that Asher is gonna get jello. xD oh yeaah. i can see it in the future! a threesome! :D

D: (is speechless by chapter)

sounds like an awesome plushie. :3

that was awesome! update soon please!

Hey,

An interesting start - I feel this was too short and brief as a whole. We are introduced to Asher's normal world and BAM magical world, he has powers etc. I really think this could've been built up more because at the moment it just is too fast, too rushed.

The concept is interesting though and you've placed enough hooks in their to make me want to keep reading. Also Asher is a fun character: sarcastic, has a bad-boy esque feel to him. It will be interesting to see how he adapts to being a dragon.

Good start :)

WinnieP