|Reviews for The Cavalier|
| faery tragedy chapter 2 . 1/31
Again, wonderful imagery. I got hungry when you described Elizabeth picking the blackberries. Additionally, you have a nice grasp of language and grammar; the dialogue seems authentic also.
Have you ever read Judith James' "Libertine's Kiss?" It might appeal to you based on what I've read so far.
Hope you update soon!
| faery tragedy chapter 1 . 1/31
Wonderful imagery. Just spot on. I could smell the gunpowder (or what I assume 17th century gunpowder smells like anyway...) and I've a soft spot for red-haired heroes.
Use commas to separate whom is being addressed at the clause is my one criticism.
| MistressBlack852 chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
soo well written! i love your descriptions and i can imagine it perfectly from how you've written it!
now it begins! lol
i'm exceptionally excited to read what happens next :)
| PotoPerson chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
Excellently written! The imagry is very vivid and its easy to see that the charachters have a lot of heart behind them. I eagerly await the next installment.
keep on writing! ;D
| Cynthia Brent chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
This is a great opening! I am so excited that someone is finally writign about the English Civil War - one of my favorite time periods in history!
By the way, "summary" is the correct spelling. But you're off to a great start!
| MistressBlack852 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Wow what a great start! It's really captivated me and drawn me to the characters :)
Now I really want to know what happens next! haha :P
Great writing style btw :)