Reviews for The Cavalier |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Again, wonderful imagery. I got hungry when you described Elizabeth picking the blackberries. Additionally, you have a nice grasp of language and grammar; the dialogue seems authentic also. Have you ever read Judith James' "Libertine's Kiss?" It might appeal to you based on what I've read so far. Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful imagery. Just spot on. I could smell the gunpowder (or what I assume 17th century gunpowder smells like anyway...) and I've a soft spot for red-haired heroes. Use commas to separate whom is being addressed at the clause is my one criticism. |
![]() ![]() ![]() soo well written! i love your descriptions and i can imagine it perfectly from how you've written it! now it begins! lol i'm exceptionally excited to read what happens next :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellently written! The imagry is very vivid and its easy to see that the charachters have a lot of heart behind them. I eagerly await the next installment. keep on writing! ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great opening! I am so excited that someone is finally writign about the English Civil War - one of my favorite time periods in history! By the way, "summary" is the correct spelling. But you're off to a great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow what a great start! It's really captivated me and drawn me to the characters :) Now I really want to know what happens next! haha :P Great writing style btw :) |