Reviews for Taking Breaths To Stay |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() DUDE! This story is amazing do far. You can indeed write VERY well! I didn't see any grammar mistakes. Kudos to you for that. I really want to see what happens after this now. You did a great job. I'm subscribing to story alerts :) Update soon. P.S. I am also writing a Justin Bieber story. You should check it out and let me know what you think. Thanks. Great work again. -Katie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story :) Great use of imagery and lots of amazing detail :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() either this story is gunna be really good or it will be a total cliche... im hoping for the first but only time will tell :) can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story so far. |