|Reviews for The Roman Slave|
| empiresofwater chapter 44 . 16h
Oh this was great! I love Rhea’s power over Titus and how he is powerless to do anything but what she wants. I also want to know more about Castor and Pollux LOL!
| empiresofwater chapter 43 . 11/1/2017
Oh I just loved the ending of this chapter! I can't wait to see where that goes lol! I love the arc of Titus having to disguise himself as a woman too.
| empiresofwater chapter 42 . 8/9/2017
I loved the chapter title of this one! It really had a lot of different meanings. I also loved the disguise Titus tried out, and how Magnus wasn't fooled at all! My only criticism is that the events of the chapter seemed to go quite quickly, especially the tournament. But I'm excited to see how Titus will fit into his new 'role'!
| empiresofwater chapter 41 . 5/1/2017
My favourite thing in this chapter was Rhea Sylvia calming sitting by as Marcus told her all about the horrible things in Rome. I could just picture that and I thought it summed up her kind of character really well! It's obvious that Marcus still has huge power over Titus as well, and Titus is tied to him! I'm excited to find out what happens with his conflicting interests and loyalties through the issue with Magnus!
| heistias chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
I'm legit in love with your writing I can't believe I haven't found this until just now! So excited to continue! :)
| empiresofwater chapter 40 . 2/26/2017
I liked this! I how you showed two sides to Magnus' control of Titus - sensual and then forceful. It was interesting to see Rhea Sylvia's involvement too and her quick decision making! Another great chapter :)
| empiresofwater chapter 39 . 1/25/2017
Going through that tribunal again must be tough for poor Titus! I wonder how that works out. My favourite thing about this chapter was how you brought in all the little details of Rome, like the triclinium and the temple of Vesta! That gave it a nice depth :)
| empiresofwater chapter 38 . 12/28/2016
I really liked how you wrote the trial - it was very intense, and I felt sorry for poor Titus. I hope he can stay brave. And that was a nice cliffhanger! Great chapter c:
| george S chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
Delicious beginning. By all means keep up the good work.
| empiresofwater chapter 37 . 11/25/2016
Oh, I'm excited about the trial! I want to see how Titus manoeuvres around that. The intrigue is fun to read about, and I feel sorry for Titus caught up in all of it! But I love the presence of Rhea Sylvie as well - so strong and brave!
| empiresofwater chapter 36 . 10/9/2016
I liked this new chapter! The last paragraph was definitely my favourite - it summed up Titus' conflicting loyalties and desires, which I like to read about. And the description of his journey to Rome with the "warm and sticky evening' was very evocative! I could just imagine it. Nice new update :)
| empiresofwater chapter 35 . 8/21/2016
I enjoyed this newest chapter! I really like the little details you put in, like the names of the parts of the villa and the appearances of the girls, with their dresses and hair! The tension between Magnus and Titus is also lovely, and I wonder how that will pan out - or will he stay loyal to his Marcus Alba? I think you've done a nice job with describing Titus' vulnerability and uncertainty in his position as master as well.
| empiresofwater chapter 34 . 6/22/2016
This was a great new chapter! I like how Titus is developing as a character, and I especially like the plot of him having to negotiate between his conflicting interests, like between Marcus and his new slave. I'll be interested to see where that storyline goes!
| riderjockrml chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Do go on, you must write than just this in order to get one interest up enough to read yet another Roman Slave Story...
| Ioga chapter 33 . 3/28/2016
Wow, I caught up with this fic after a long break and it's moved FAST.
Lots of elements here that almost make me want to write an alternate reality fanfic. All that potential of winning political influence by pretty boyfriend... ;)
Thanks for this!