Reviews for He’s RealityShe’s Fantasy
Brittney chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I like this one, it resonates with me
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
The whole Reality and Fantasy thing was really interesting. It definitely changed the meaning on the piece. The only thing is capitalizing Rivals which seemed odd to me.

I also thought the repetition worked well to emphasize different aspects of their relationship and who they are.

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WingzXFreedom chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I almost didn't get it at first, but as I read on, it made sense. The one thing I have to ask is that, was there a particular reason as to why "he's" reality and "she's" fantasy and not the other way around? Well, I really liked the poem, don't get me wrong. PS. for the stanza, I think you could try holding shiftenter to create a break, and regualr enter for the stanza. -WxF