Reviews for Birth Mother
Mormeril Dark Lady of Insanity chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Pretty good. Could have been longer with more room for plot development, but still good.
Super Princess Daisy chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
that was quite a dream! I'm glad you made a story out of it
Ed Harley chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
It's interesting how many good ideas come in dreams. I do like the plot but I think it could be structured better. After reading the title, the summary under the title, and the first four lines of the story I knew the basics of what was going to happen. Perhaps it would be better to keep the surprises for the end of the story: have the protagonist be chased by the killer (for unknown reasons), and then toward the end of the story reveal that the killer is her own mother.