Reviews for Faked
E X H I B I T I O N I S T chapter 8 . 6/28/2011
Just stumbled upon this story. It's rolling along nicely and it's cute how Ellie's finally gone home to her pack and reunited with her mate, Aiden. I wonder how Alexander's going to take this change? Or if he's going to smooth along with it? What about Aly and Zach? And Taly? The explanation of werewolves seemed really bried to Aly and Taly but I honestly don't know how to make it realistic without it dragging out, kicking and screaming. I hope that you don't write Ellie as pretencious. It came a little close to that when she walked up to Alexander and Aiden out back, as if she owned the world but then again she most likely knew inside all along that this was hers and Aiden was her mate. Anyway, nice story, looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Iluna seraphina chapter 8 . 5/20/2011
alamodie chapter 8 . 5/10/2011
sounds interesting so far, update soon!
LivesTooShort52 chapter 8 . 5/9/2011
Is it fair to say that I don't like you for not updating often enough?

I do LOVE LOVE LOVE the story though... My school is out within the next month, so I expect you to update soon.
HarukaRekin chapter 3 . 5/9/2011
have to admit love the story so far :D love werewolf and all kinds of crazy supernatural stuff plz keep it up!
YeahYeahYeah chapter 8 . 5/9/2011
TOTALLY love this story! Please update son!
Tasha chapter 8 . 5/9/2011
Interesting chapter

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AMZIEXXX chapter 8 . 5/8/2011
You should totally update more.

I liked the new chapter by the way.

Update soon!


Fantasy's Dreamer chapter 8 . 5/8/2011
oh sweet baby jesus thank the lord that you update I've been waiting since god knows when! I thought the chapter was good and i was like yea i love that alpha gene! please update soon! and p.s. i love your story!
AMZIEXXX chapter 7 . 5/3/2011
You seriously need to update.

I love your story.


Alex0007 chapter 7 . 4/20/2011
This story is amazing! Please update soon; I need to know reactions! :D
Iluna seraphina chapter 7 . 3/6/2011
damn! why aren't you writing i want to read jour story!

Kansiol chapter 7 . 2/25/2011
This story really has a lot of potential to be an amazing piece but I really suggest you find a beta to edit and supervise your work because there are a few things that should be noted. One would be you should really think about the whole 800 year old head over heels for a 3 or 5 year old because even though this is a werewolf story, it's still just plain creepy and automatically links the readers mind to connect the king to a pedophile. Secondly, no ones reactions are realistic. The main heroine is taking it all like "Oh. Look, I'm a wolf. Amazing. I'm so shocked." Her reaction is dull and about equal to a jar of ketchup. (sorry if that sounded really mean) All the other characters need some work too because like the heroine, they're unrealistic. No one seems to come to life. Thirdly, this links all the way back to a beta (an editor). You need to work on phrasing and not cramming so much info into one chapter. Space them out a little so the reader learns a bit at a time and they have time to actually guess what happens next. It won't be interesting anymore if the reader knows everything and can predict what happens to everyone right off the bat. So again, I apologize if any of that sounded rude but it irked me to no end. Keep up the good work ;)
Charlee Rayne chapter 7 . 2/25/2011
jeez. she really did hold out for suspence, didn't she?
Chocorange888 chapter 7 . 2/25/2011
I can feel a lovely story coming already, although the idea of an 800 year old being in love with a 3 year old is a bit creepy...But I'm enjoying the story thus far and I wish you the best of luck
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