Reviews for The Babylonian Garden
Jessy-8739 chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
...shiva has a rather...complicated history... :-$
NexusCRStorm chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
because there may be no tomorrow!

Truer words have never been spoken.

and my throat was a barren plain long afflicted by drought

*Beautiful metaphor.

I felt it physically that drain

**I would suggest rewording that...it tripped me up whilst I read it.
NexusCRStorm chapter 2 . 3/30/2011
_...Antoine cracks me up. It's good to see that as much as things change, they stay the same.

You and your cliff hangers though!
NexusCRStorm chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I'm glad you didn't take my advice. I'll be watching for updates.