Reviews for Unfinished
LuckycoolHawk9 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I liked the darkness of this poem because it supports the message of love lost by one person and how it affects them. I also liked the metaphors because they support the dark theme overall. This review is for the Review marathon which is linked on my profile.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
This is an amazing piece. I really loved it, the imagery was superb and you included so much emotion and its amazing :-D
scarletrosethorn chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
i really like this peice of work it has so much emotion and discriptive words in it i just like how it all comes togther!
xfacewithoutnamex chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
i almost felt what you were feeling this stroy was very well written.
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 1/20/2011

this is so greet I loved it

"Those snake green eyes…"

I love that line and how its so haunting

I think it fits really well into the poem bc ITS MY ABSOLUTE FAVE LINE

so obviously its good

the ending is so upsetting :(