Reviews for hypothetical haunting
StoryMonster chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I liked the tentativeness of the ending, it was good!

It added a different feel to the , I liked it!

Keep writing!
classic violet chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
It's a really great look at, in my opinion, young love. I love how it's told from their point of view. I especially love the first stanza. Great job
the lovely rebel chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Wow, I can completely relate to this. I really like it. :)

It kind of almost reminds me of Sylvia Plath's "Mad Girl's Love Song" in a way- not quite as whimsical, but it's got the same sort of feel to it or something.

Anyway, I really do like it and the idea is one that I completely understand. It's a nice poem.