|Reviews for All I need|
| Self-DissectedPsyche chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Nice; while I don't play guitar, music in general is a fantastic escape/release/reprise, and you've portrayed this perfectly. I've always been told that, in haiku, if a sentence carries over into the next line the whole thing is flawed. In the case of "All I Need", I feel the flow is just fine. If you have mixed feelings, then I'd take another look and think of other wordings. I liked it though, so change isn't necessary.