Reviews for Something
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
[i am not a spelling nazi, however, i hate when i myself spell things wrong and assume that people also get annoyed by accidental errors.. "perceive", "concentration", "choreography" are spelled wrong :3 ]

this is beautiful. the busy, breathtaking parade of adjectives and their hosts. really like the ending.

also: "The air becomes tangible,

filled with loud sounds, density." i love that line