|Reviews for Lacking Infinity|
| Fractured Illusion chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
"just for the sake of slower us?"
Hmm, odd wording. Do you mean "for the sake of the slower of us" or "the slower ones"?
"We've have ample of dreams,"
had instead of have, I think.
I thought the poem was interesting, I mean not a lot of poetry adresses Time :p So it was something original I thought. I'd also like for it to slow donw sometimes.
"We've have ample of dreams, / but we don't have enough of you."
Good way to end it! You can really summarize the entirity of it in those two lines. Well done.
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