Reviews for When Things Go Wrong |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this! please continue to write this one. i'm so anxious to see what the girl does to her...and what happens between her and jonathan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked it. u should fiinish it :) |
![]() ![]() o...m...g... UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() PAMMY.! I CANT LOG-IN SINCE I DONT HAVE AN ACCOUNT YET SO I'LL JUST GO ANONYMOUS OR SOMETHING... XD I LIKE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING. THE STORY IS TOTALLY HUMOROUS. I DONT KNOW IF MY HUNCHES ARE CORRECT BUT I'LL BET JONATHAN LIKES WENDY TO THE MAX.. XD AND I LIKE THE PRINCIPAL'S NAME.! MR. POWERS.! XD I JUST LOL.! OHH AND MAYBE YOU COULD ADD SOME DESCRIPTION OF THE CHARACTERS AS WELL.. SO THAT THEIR IMAGE WOULD BE PRINTED TO OUR MIND.. IM STILL HAVING A BLURRY IMAGE OF THEM... XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This definitely had more humour than the previous chapter. The first two scenes were quick-paced, though. I couldn't "feel" them much. But I liked the last one, I did not expect it. I love how realistic Wendy's thoughts are. Like always, you've ended the chapter in an unpredictable way. But you're killing me with your cliffies T_T Keep up the good work! Abby :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i hope u continue ur story and update more often cause i really like it especially that ur in the philippines cause i am too hope u read this bye :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate you. I really do. I got all excited about a new chapter and what i get is an Author's Note. SERIOUSLY? Anyway, I'm sorry about your technical difficulties, but now that you have a new machine, updating should be that much quicker! I love this story and don't you EVER take it down! One Hopeless Romantic to Another, Ms. Vampire girl 130 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... That's really saddening... I hope you can update soon. -Amy Stardust |
![]() ![]() ![]() im reading your story now and its amazing update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next chapter please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty awesome now finish it! hehe i cant decide which team! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woh! Another wonderful chapter, continue my dear? |