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![]() ![]() ![]() Ermahgerddd I love it so much! I'm so glad it's a long one-shot because any shorter than this would simply not be enough! The characters were realistic, and I honestly didn't mind the girl being quite indecisive because she does sound like a real person. Real people can be jerks and totally blind to the truth sometimes. I was smiling at all the interactions with Anton. Gosh, he's so cute. I know this was written two years ago but ugh I had to review. It was awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() soooooooo cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I'm here to share some news: This story has been added to the One-Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo! Here's your review: Nothing is ever official unless it's Facebook official. And Cassie Sutherland knows this. That's why she's absolutely dismayed when she finds out on Facebook that her crush, Siegfried is dating a beautiful, kind Swedish girl called Maya. Of course, things complicate and she soon finds herself with the attention of Maya's twin brother, Anton. Awkward? Yes. Also, whilst he's determined to have her as his girlfriend but Cassie isn't so sure about this. This provides to be a bit of a problem. So what happens next? Definitely many interesting and confusing and complicated things - just like everyone likes it. On a side note: this one shot is extremely long (around 25,000 words). It was still enjoyable but you might want to be aware of that as it's not a quick read. When you do decide to read it though, don't be frightened by the almost invisible scroll button on the side. It's really easy to get into so that you won't notice the length by the time you've started it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwww... Loved it! Megan :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find Cassie annoying and Anton adorable and wow I REALLY LOVE THEM BOTH :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was nice. Very real, but I have to say, Cassie is in so much denial. Haha. Maja was a God-send to her. Awesome one-shot though. Keep it up. Your reader, Clawsrtike590 |
![]() ![]() This was absolutely amazing! Usually I'm one of those people who read and never review, but this oneshot was just so good I couldn't stop myself xDDD I've been down lately, and this story cheered me up a lot! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really enjoyable read. Your characters seem genuine, and the build-up to the ending was at a good pace. Thanks for sharing this with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! I like your writing style and your characters. :) There was a lot in your one shot that I totally didn't expect, like them having sex and her almost dying. Lol. But I liked that because it kept your story and plot interesting! :) keep writing! |
![]() ![]() Hmm I'm not sure on this one. I think it'd have been better to break it up in to 3 or 4 chapters instead of line breaks. The MC is such a jerk, I find it a little unrealistic that he could still have feelings for someone like that, and any guy that takes a girl back after that is plain stupid. But seeing as it's a story I'll let it slide a little :). The general arc of the story is pretty decent, the former crush should have had more of a presence, we only knew she had feelings for the guy because you told us she did, we didn't get to see them interact. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, can I just say I can relate to you? Facebook is in my top 5 ways of finding out... But I like happy endings, so props to Cassie and Anton. Just one question though, did Anton like Cassie before they met in class? And how did Siegfried even notice Cassie like that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I think you are really good at writing oneshot stories. I really enjoy reading your oneshots. My fav character here is Eric. He's so funny! |
![]() ![]() I've actually read this story before just cant remember when :)) i loved it then and i still love it now! Great job :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg what is it with jerk female protagonists this day? I've been reading more of them. I seriously wanted to slap Cassie like a kangaroo. She just kept bringing Anton down and looks quite impassive about it. She was lucky he took her back. I wouldve let her get run by that car. Ok maybe not. |
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