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![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the longest one-shots I have ever read.. THANK YOU for writing this very long one-shot! I absolutely loved it, I could not stop reading it! Loved it! :D |
![]() ![]() Yo! I just checked out this website today and your story was the first one I read and I just got to say, I LOVE IT! 1) It's hilarious. You have a wonderful way with writing. 2) The romance part is way too adorable. I was squealing in my mind like a little girl. But this is great! :) Hope you do more one-shots! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME:D me really like, why cant awesome amazing guys like anton and eric eist in my life? excellent plot, btw! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anton sounds dishy. Hehe, love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anton? Shy? And then totally like that? Man, he's hot! ;) |
![]() ![]() REALLY COOL-AWESOME-GREAT STORY!i really enjoyed reading it and i think you have a TALENT:)im not are such weird names in that story lol:p but 's really nice,eric's and freya are funny...and cassie is so fucking ,story of your life!:pp |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really cute. I wish there was a description of cassie, but the story was still great. I really want someone like anton to confess to me, btw why did he like her, when she had never seen him before, love at first sight? Thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed that story actually I've really enjoyed all of your stories (that I've read) but I do have one observation that I don't mean as criticism but your plot lines are all kind of similar. Boy meets girl one of them falls in love and the other takes until last minute to figure it out. As I mentioned still a big fan |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the plot of the story. I think it's especially funny that it's based on your actual scenario because I did think it was especially believable. I had a hard time figuring out the characters. I got the impression that Cassie did as well, which made me feel a bit less lost but I felt that the characters often filled whatever place they needed to in order for the story to keep moving, rather than truly becoming individual distinct characters. Anton was the hardest to read. I imagine this could all be a compliment as I feel I lived Cassie's interactions with them but I don't know how I feel about the development. Excellent writing. Very beautiful descriptions and awkward moments. Those are often hard to pop in there are you feel awkward even writing them but yours were believable and painful-perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Longest oneshot i have EVER read that's for sure, haha. But I LOVED THIS :) Just the whole plot and characters and everything! You have this way of writing that just makes everything understandable and so...true :L the only fault i would put in this is the length of the actual story (which an be good) - i reckon longgggg onshots like these can be very off-putting...just saying. Overall though, I wish i could read another like this! Great writing :D haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.M.G. I love this so much that it hurts! And anton, oh god! He's not badass but he still has my heart going thump thump thump! Cliche yet original! Love it! I am completely fangirls over you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! I'M HYPERVENTILATING! I SUPER DUPER LOVE IT! You're so great, awesome and amazing writer. I've read it from the beginning until the end, no words are overlooked! HAHA! :)) Congratulations for this interesting, exciting, unique, wonderful, realistic and fantastic fic. :))) I'm so in love with Anton right now. I hope there's still a guy, like him, out there who's existing. He's my dream guy. haha! :)) I'm so happy for Anton and Cassie. They're so sweet and perfect for each other. I really really really LOVE it! I like Eric and Freya too. They're cool to be bestfriends. haha. and I like Maja too. She's so nice! And about Sieg, no comment! HAHA! I think he's arrogant! LOL! :))) ALL IN ALL, I LOVE THIS FIC EVER! MY FAVORITE! I'm so glad I found out this fic after checking your profile and works. :)) I'm sure I'm going to read this fic all over again just like your "Blue Eyes". :)) And before anything else, about your Author's note. If this story is somewhat related to your real life, I'm sure you can find a guy like Anton too! :)) Goodluck with your lovelife! :))) More power to you! Until next time! :))) Facebook ROCKS! HAHA! *Sorry for being hyper* I just LOVE it so much! :))) Anyways, I'm outta here. It's already 1:00am and I still have not study for my midterm exams tomorrow or should i say later? HAHA! :)) Wish me luck? :)) OK, I'm hoping for more one-shot fics from you. hehe.! Have a nice day! Bye! :))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() SCREAMING i thought i was over the days i started flailing about characters on fictionpress, i barely set foot on this site anymore. but oh my god, i'm not lying when i say this is one of the best stories i've ever read, one shot or not. it's whimsical yet realistic, and it's cliche but not overbearingly so and damn i just love the way you write this is so brilliant i can't think properly and full stops seem like a waste of space. *dies* k going off reading everything else you've ever written in your life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not one to give long reviews so I'm just going to say: I adored this, I love your characters and Anton is the love of my life 3 great job :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably one of the best one-shots I've read in a long while. I like how Anton feels... different from the other, typical male characters in stories? And yet he still makes you feel like you'd fall in love with him in a heartbeat. I loved the way you write the story. It's really entertaining, and I had a good read. :) |