Reviews for Behind Those Eyes
Vegetarian Meatballs chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
I appreciate rhyme schemes and your subtle rhyming made the poem very powerful. I feel like a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece. Nice work!
MentalBrink chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I like this one too! I can relate perfectly :P
Rhocar chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
fantastic, very emotional, just one little thing, is the first word in the last line correct, or should it be "that made her feel so low"
Punslinger chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
This is so beautifully sad. You managed to draw a memorable picture with a few well-chosen words shaped into graceful phrases.
GriLl0ws chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Hey!

I love the poem, thats awesome, and I hate to say it but that totally sounds like me lol

B.