Reviews for Boy for Free
Raebie chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Aw, very sad! You did a good job making this very much like a child was telling the story. Well done!
Shirin Madavey chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
I actually enjoyed reading this. I liked the ending and how it gave the reader a sense of mystery. I don't see the point in mentioning the knee, especially if it doesn't hurt the protagonist, and isn't part of the rest of the plot. Perhaps you could have added a few sentences of character development, but other than that it was good :D