Hi!

Did you ever write the sequel? Would love to read it if so!

Complete?! Complete?! D: You suck. xD Jokes. I wish your story had more romance in it. :P I love it though. More!

I loved this chapter! xD squeals.

Less than a second later, numerous groans accompanied with her evil cackle drifted down the hall.

xD And oh snap shit's going down. O_o

'Uh-huh.' Looking me up and down, she licked her lips. 'You're hot when you're frustrated.'

Haha I love how flirty Ashlyn is.

Loved this chapter. :P Fave scenes:

'You're, uh, wow…'

'Easy there, don't want to fall over, do you?' She chided, grabbing me by the waist.

I opened my eyes and locked onto Ashlyn's mischievous grin.

'Hey there, you aren't going to faint, are you?' She mocked, as her fingers dropped to entwine with mine.

Enjoying my discomfort, she pulled me flush against her, wrapping my arms around her waist. 'Now, now, you can't knock this, can you?' Turning my words back on me, she grinned wickedly.

xD :D

"The students froze, blinked, then threw themselves back in their seats."
LOL. Loved it, but grr your stories are always so confusing at the start.

I fear I will never understand the connection between dead by sunrise and this. I really liked the first one but thinking of this as a remake of it I can't get into it. Don't really know why.

It would have been cool to see where the original of this story would go, ending with Ardere asleep and what now. I liked the original much better then this one. it would nice to see a sequel to this adaption, what with the un finished ending and cliffhanger and all

Awesome story! The zombie parts scared the crap out of me at night though. I kept on thinking something was gonna get me.

You have a feel typos here and there but it's so small it doesnt even matter.

The beginning was confusing though. I was introduced to so many characters (and their nicknames).

Badass story and characters. It deserves more reviews in my opinion.

this is an killer story you could continue or sequel or whatever but more more more

This was brilliant. I really enjoyed it. In fact I couldn't put it down and read through till 6am in the morning. I can't believe it ended there. Hopefully you have plans for a sequel!

This is such an amazing story! I really hope that you write some more on it! I love the emotional turmoil that goes on between Ashlyn and Hailey; it makes them feel more like real people. This is written so well, I can't wait to read more! ...Hopefully :)

I love this story so far. So angsty and just well written. I can't wait to read more.

mwe! *rubs hands together* so excited! i wonder if it's Malachi? hnhn enemies closer, indeed! hn can't wait!