This story is fairly haunting. I'm really liking it so far, even though it's so disheartening. I understand what you're saying, and I get the emotions you're trying to convey. I especially liked chapter four.

Just... wow, how do you relate to these things without having actually done them? I can relate to a few of them, and just so you know you should write more.

Hey. I really like this. You're a very talented writer!