Reviews for Mint Allergies
xEchoxInfernox chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
hahaha! so cool! i love seth, guys awesome. love it)
JamieBell chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Hahaha, I love it. Hilarious. :)
firestar267 chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
haha! What a witty and original idea! Really well carried out, I thoroghly enjoyed the read :)
cerebral chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
aw that's so cute hahaha.. LOL best line was Seth's note on the napkin hahahaha loved it )

Natasha Dust chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
That... that was original and funny and awesome! *two thumbsup* ;D
annoyance chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
The only thing that comes to mind is 'aww'. Superbly cute :)

MantraMagazine chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Aw! That was so cute! I love how nonchalant Seth was. "Hi Fred." Like it was no big deal. But I guess if they were in his home town, it'd make sense. His allergies weren't too bad, although you didn't include Mentha.

Thanks for posting!
Whirlymerle chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I love the humor here, especially the high on marijuana and watching LoTR part.

[Do you parents still despise me?] This should be "your".

This is so adorable! I'm glad how you chose to write about the love between two normal, interesting characters, as opposed to two ultra gorgeous, good for nothing, perfectly bland ones.


Pseudonym59 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
This was so cute! Mint allergies, heh. I love how original this was. :)
DreamingInNewYork chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Very rarely do I read a story that makes me all smiley and gushy, and "HAHA that's so cute I WANT THAT"


HAHA that's so cute, I WANT that.

Cute fic. Original. (:
Too Much Info chapter 1 . 1/28/2011



See ya'
IridescentMonkee chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Wonderful read! Keep it up ;)
Arreana chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Loved it. Partially because this is the story of my first date: my husband and I were watching Schindler's List (really, what were we thinking?), it was as awkward as you portrayed it with your own character, and then I found out about his poultry allergy. We ended up getting married, and if it worked for us why couldn't it work for Fred?

I also loved this story for the dialouge, which kept the reader going. It really is a strength of yours.

If I had to give one tip I would suggest maybe padding out your environs a bit. Other than that you're spot on

(Thank you kindly for your review, as well)

OpenLocksWhoeverKnocks chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
aw this is so sweet! i love it!
taylor chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
I found this in the community and I was awesomely surprised. It's fluffy but not completely predictable. I liked the uniqueness of it and how awesome your style was. Please keep writing more! :D
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