Reviews for Mint Allergies
sunflower.kiss chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Soo adorable :P
despite-the-protest chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
I love nerd stories, as you can see from my own! Great job with this!
Cherry Pez chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Very cute and well done.

Great job! I can't wait to see where this goes.
Midnight113 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Very cute, I loved his little note to her, lol. Well done!
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
I think I'm in love too.


Oh my god. I just squealed. This is amazing.
castiel89 chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Aww! He's the type of guy that shows chivalry isn't dead yet! So cute.

Can you send me a real life Seth? Please? :)
balloonfista chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
ah, that was awesome :D and that note at the end was epic :D

WishBlade chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
The last line? Completely genius. This was seriously adorable and hilarious ] Loved it to pieces!
MistressBlack852 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
that's utterly adorable!
ghurl00 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
That was cute. XD. Seth sounds like an awesome guy. XD.
asianinvasion0530 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Ahahaha so nerdy cute! I love it!

Also I think the name thing just brings this up to a whole other level of nerdiness. It's so great! ]
kewltashigirl chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Somehow you managed to use cliches without them seeming cliche. How do you do it?

I also like the quirky nerdness you put in here that's simple, cheesy, and only slightly romantic.

Keep on writing!

her brown eyes chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Aww, very cute. Light-hearted fluffiness. Great oneshot.
Ravina chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Very nicely done - I really enjoyed reading this!

One thing I noticed though: Fred reads Seth's name-tag but then says his back is facing them. And since name-tags are usually on the front of shirts, I'm not sure how that would have worked out. :)

Happy writing!

- Rebekah
dx713 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Okay, were to begin.

First, I like your narrator from the first part. Not dating a drug dealer looks very sane to me!

In the second part I laughed at the reference to Shakira. Way to go with unexpected metaphors!

The Star Trek joke / Battlestar Galactica reference was fun too. And while I had spotted the end coming, you bring it out in a fun fashion that doesn't make it so cliche. Either that or I'm a sucker for optimistic romance. Nice read, anyway.
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