Reviews for 100 Theme Haiku
Bloody Red Moon chapter 10 . 3/6/2011
These are excellent.

I wish I could have entered

this haiku challenge.

I'm writing a set

of one hundred one now, not

competitvely.

Heh, there are a lot

of reviews written haiku

style. So awesome.

I should really stop

typing soon. How about now? No,

gotta finish this.

Bloody
Alix Cohen chapter 10 . 3/5/2011
I think you have too.

Excellent choice to put at the

end of a challenge.

These haiku are neat

Varied; a testament to

Versatile writing. :)
Alix Cohen chapter 9 . 3/5/2011
Yes, we must dream first

Life is getting in the way

of my own writing.

Luckily, I have

Spring break starting as we speak

Then I will have time.

I think I may use

this list when I do my own

Hundred Themes story.
lymli chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
I like all the haikus, speically this one :)
Alix Cohen chapter 7 . 2/28/2011
"You can't just barge in

like that!" haha I'd add the

Exclamation point.

More hands would be nice

Or more hours in the day

to get better sleep?
Alix Cohen chapter 6 . 2/16/2011
What is the one hun-

dred theme challenge? I kind of

want to write for it.
Alix Cohen chapter 4 . 2/13/2011
Tonight I'm somehow

in the mood for something sweet

this just hits the spot!

Maybe it's because

I'm reading Hetalia

fics when I should be

writing an essay.

But I feel lonely tonight.

Happy Hallmark day.
Grey-Blue chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
Wow. What a beautiful combination! Some of these make me smile, and a couple even drew a laugh. Others are pretty literal and straightforward. Some felt so true as to be profound, and hit that spot inside me where I have no thoughts. I like those ones the best. But without the others to break things up, I don't think I could handle them.

I don't know how you feel about this collection you've got going on, but I find it very touching and basically... just right.

Well done!
Alix Cohen chapter 3 . 2/3/2011
aww...such sweet verses!

Glad to hear from you again

tho it be so brief.
playing in gasoline chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
They are all beautiful! Seeking Solace and Love are my favorites.

The 100 themes are exciting. I'm doing one as well-though a different version and not in haiku. This is much more challenging.
Alix Cohen chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
And I break my rule:

it seems really awkward to

say "weren't" as one

or "hour" in two parts-

I know it's how you hear them,

but to me, it's odd.
Alix Cohen chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Are you basing these

Partly off song titles? I

see a resemblance.

And having just learned

IPA, I'll no longer

pick at syllables. :)