Another amazing chapter. Bomani's anger diverted our attention from a curious fact, that she was using black magic. But then again, people noticed this. But how was she using it in her weakened state? Maybe, she was not. Maybe, it was someone else. The Purple Man? The Death Eater (I'm not sure I got the name right)? I guess I'll see.

As an avid reader since my birth, I've learned to identify how good the story will be during the first chapter, paragraph, or even sentence. However, your flawless blend of words showed me that this story would be an example of the true way to use language to answer the questions of how, when, why, what, and who. Throughout this chapter, I observed a stream of words that I could see through clearly, able to stop everything and take a closer look. Every scene flows fluidly from the computer to my head, showing me that I will never be able to do this. I think you and I are going to be very, very, good friends.

WOW! I've been wanting to read the rest of this for awhile now! Great work!

You have a really good story here!

Hello, I read the first chapters of your story, and I really love it. I'm considering buying the rest, trough I am not sure if I can ( I think the site use dollars, and I'm from Belgium and use euro... T-T )
I wanted to say I found a typo, simply a forgotten space in this chapter: # "W-well, that's what you get for calling me that! A-after all, I have a name! It's Khensa!" I'm stammering like a desperate fool. I ama desperate fool.# you didn't separate am and a in the last sentence :)

Nice story!

I really enjoyed reading 'Farro', thank you for posting it up where we can all read it free! I like your character names, completely weird but they make your world all the more original.

Oh my gosh, it pains me that I have to leave for an appointmentnow,I just want to keep on story. Thanks for sharing it with the rest of us!

this story just keeps getting better. i love her smarts,and her temper,in the latter she and Bomani seems evenly matched. Can't wait to see where you are going with this story!

This story is just too exciting, I can barely take time out to review;) She is one resourseful and self reliant girl, at the same time,she so clearly is deep in fight and/or flight mode,it is hartwrenching to see. The Farro legend was really interesting, and it was goos to finally get a clue as to why she was taken prisoner in the first place. I feared for her when she got backed into a corner regarding her abilities. It is good to see that her stress doesn't detract her fromother peoples motivation,she can't rest easy she gets backon her feet. I just want her to escape to a secret garden where she can heal herself and then take care of business. I like this story so much!

Sheesh,she just cannon catch a break. Can't believe he could kick her, the poor darlin. Interesting story,can't wait toget to know it and its inhabitants better!

wow,what a first chapter that was. Poor girl,you portray her anguis and terrorized mind very well. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

this whole piece was awesome! i loved the detail and the dialouge was super good. i'm really excited to read the sequel!

Awe, I still freaking love him. Becasue of the bonus chapters I feel like I understand Bomani a little bit better. And yes, I promise I will leave a review for both books on Amazon. I had already meant to do that, but I'm so forgetful sometimes. Perhaps I'll review Farro now and then I'll do Sulfur once I finish it.
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Oh my god. I had no idea Bomani was so awesome. I read Farro as a published book on my kindle and my sister told me it started on fictionpress. She suggested I read the bonus chapters of this story and I'm so happy I did. I freaking love Bomani even more now! Congrats on getting your books published. I'm in the middle of reading the second one right now. They are so good! Consider me a fan!
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