I found this chapter to be incredibly funny. I could just picture Bomani underneath the table forcing Khensa to stay put. I don't like Bata. He seems creepy.

I felt bad for Shana and Khensa. It was so awkward when she freaked out at her governess.

Khensa is fabulous. I laughed so hard when she threw the pudding at the prince! He deserved it though. He has quite the temper, doesn't he? And the fact that Lateef was happy that she had thrown the pudding simply because she hadn't touched it was funny.

Oh Bomani...

Well, I imagine her pretending to be Lateef's daughter is going to get her into some trouble somewhere along the line. She seems like the trouble attracting kind.

Lol. I actually laughed so hard when was reading this. She broke his nose! And then she had to hurt him even more to fix it, oh that was just great. Brilliant!

Man, what is his deal with witchcraft? -Sigh- I imagine it's hard to take in all of this at once. I mean, she thoguht that Farro was just a legeand and now Lateef is all, you're a Faroo, surpirise!

Man, she's agile. And Bomani is still a jerkface!

I imagine she has to be in a lot of pain.

Okay, so technically I didn't read this on Fictionpress. I bought the book for my kindle and read it there, but I wanted to tell you what I think, so i'll try to review here when I read from my kindle.

Okay, so here goes. What a jerkface! What kind of person attacks a poor helpless naked woman! Okay, so she's not totally helpless, but still.

Farro is honestly one of the best stories I have ever read on FP. You did a splendid job with developing the characters and weaving together a captivating plotline! I look forward to reading more of your work!

-Millie

This is possibly one of the best things I've read on fp in quite sometime. It's a gem. I love all of it, the plot, the world and the characters are so in depth it's amazing. Beautiful work, thanks for writing it.

Now, on to the sequel.

loved this book! cant wait for the complete sequel. umm i'll go check out the book sales and leave a review if i dont need an account!

when the pace first picked up earlier, i feared it would die again. but you've proved me wrong, and im greatly enjoying this! xD

ohmygoodness. i was starting to find it boring... but her kah's finally come forth!

to clarify what i said: i thought the slow pace was fine at first, but then it continued and she seemed nowhere closer to finding things out... and suddenly the pace picked up tenfold.