Reviews for This tangled mess of life
Fate Retold chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
This was beyond honest and real. Buddy, I could feel your pain in this. I really could. I think this poem was one of your finest pieces even if it was so sad. It was raw without being overly graphic. It didn't need any curse words to show it's seriousness like I always end up doing in my fics lol.

Was this poem a way that you really are feeling at the moment? Because if so, I hope that you are okay.