|Reviews for Walker|
| SugarRayne chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Oh wow. Spooky. You really captured the idea of childhood fears being real very, very well! Nice work!
| ZyggyGirl chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Excellent work! I was a bit skeptical when I first started reading, expecting another run-of-the-mill nightmare-adaptation. But it was well-written, and you have quite the knack for putting emotion and color into your work.
The repitition of the 'good boy' theme and your use of the parentheses reminded me of Stephen King's style.
The were very few errors, and there was only one that really stood out:
'Toys strewn about the hardwood floor in the bedroom of six-year-old Jamie Farren, he had no worries of anyone else hearing him.'
This sentence reads awkwardly. The first part is almost a sentence fragment, and 'he had no worries of anyone else hearing him' doesn't really relate to it. Consider revising.
Keep up the good work!