Reviews for The Guide For Guys
Candescence chapter 16 . 3/22/2011
Aww Casey's cute. Mr Desmond is an ass...I like this story so far. I feel so bad for Michelle on what she's going through and what she had been going through when she was little from Desmond. He isn't looking so well in my books right now.

Oh, and before I forget this passage:

"I don't want to oppose-"

said my Michelle had me laughing. I think you meant impose, but it's fine. It just stood out to me and I thought...I don't know what I thought but I felt like it was something to point out. Of course, you're the author and maybe that's exactly what you wanted to put. It just gave me a little laugh. I love this story so far though
Rainbow35 chapter 24 . 3/20/2011
Oh my god! O_O

Well, I definitely wasn't expecting any of that! I hate that Desmond only has a year to live, because that's so sad! :( Him and Michelle should be together forever, I don't want him to die!

I do like the way it ended on a cliffhanger though, because I like cliffhangers, they're exciting. :P

I shall definitely have to check out the sequel! :) This was a great story overall, and I loved it! I seriously really enjoyed it. I can totally see why you have so many reviews, because this story is great! :)

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Rainbow35 chapter 23 . 3/20/2011
I cleverly managed to submit my last review before I finished it, so I shall finish it here:

I had absolutely not expected Casey to be with Megan! How on earth did that happen? Like, why? How come Megan seems to be getting all of Michelle's boys? :P

Anyway, I'm glad Desmond went and comforted her, because it kinda needed to happen. Same with the kiss. :)

And now to review this chapter:

Wow, I loved the Guide For Girls that Desmond had written, because I hadn't been expecting that at all, and what he'd said about Michelle was so sweet! :)

I definitely was NOT expecting Desmond to have cancer too! :O I don't really like that, because it's sad. :(

I'm glad that everything seems to be okay now, though. :P

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Rainbow35 chapter 22 . 3/20/2011
I liked the way that what Desmond thought was happening with Michelle and Casey at her house actually was happening, because it's kinda cool. :P

I also liked the way Michelle's mom got all over-emotional, because I think it's funny. :P
Rainbow35 chapter 21 . 3/20/2011
I like that Michelle is doubting Casey, because I like Desmond better than him anyway, and he should've saved her, but he didn't!

I like that Desmond feels bad for lying to Michelle, because it proves once again that he can be very nice, and often is. :P But what did he lie about? :/
Rainbow35 chapter 20 . 3/20/2011
I liked the way Michelle asked for Desmond in her sleep, because it means she must really like him, more than she likes Casey. :P

I kinda like the way she doesn't remember anything, though I'm not sure why. :P

I like that Desmond's being so nice to her right now, but what is it that makes him be mean to her when he is? Hmm...
Rainbow35 chapter 19 . 3/20/2011
I liked the way Michelle was so indecisive in the beginning, because I wouldn't've known what to do, either. :P

I also like the way Desmond saved Michelle from Drew, because that was nice of him, and I wouldn't've liked anything bad to happen to Michelle.

I also like the way she's just telling Desmond everything from being drunk or whatever, it's funny. :P

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Rainbow35 chapter 18 . 3/20/2011
I loved that Michelle was so happy and "in love" (I'm skeptical of teen 'love'), because I feel like she deserves it after suffering through the whole story up 'til recently. :P

Hahaha, I loved Desmond's plan-thing, it's brilliant! I should've known he'd have read the guide anyway! xP

I feel kinda bad for Michelle now. :P Hopefully Casey will be understanding about her predicament...? Hmm.
Rainbow35 chapter 17 . 3/20/2011
Brilliant! xD

I loved it when Michelle kissed Casey, because it was adorable. xP

I liked it when you switched to Desmond's POV, because I like him, and I'm glad he's in the story again. :P

The plan of his sounds very exciting, I can't wait to see what it is! :)

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Rainbow35 chapter 16 . 3/20/2011
I like that Michelle was comparing Casey to Desmond the whole time, because I think it means she still kinda likes Desmond. :P

I didn't really like that Casey didn't kiss her, because it would've been cute and romantic if he did. But then again, he was probably just nervous.

I also liked the way he protected her from the dodgy cashier by pretending he was her boyfriend. :P

Also, I've been wondering since about the second chapter or so (or whenever it was mentioned), why did Michelle have her brother's shirt in her locker? Was it in case a guy ever needed to borrow clothes, or what? It seems kinda strange. :P

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Rainbow35 chapter 15 . 3/20/2011
Aww, this was so cute!

I loved how Casey was so nice to her and asking if she was okay, because it's so cute and sweet! :)

I also liked how he saved her from detention, for the same reasons. :P

I didn't like how mean the teacher was, it was so horrible of her to just read out the note like that, and give Michelle detention! :(

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Rainbow35 chapter 14 . 3/20/2011
I like how Desmond is being so nice to her, because it's so sweet. :) I do find it a bit weird though, that when Megan was hurt so badly she needed an ambulance, he didn't seem to care, but when Michelle was hurt, he did care? I get that he likes Michelle more than Megan, but it just seems a bit weird.

I like the way he's calling her Michelle now, because I guess it means he really cares a lot about her right now, right?

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Rainbow35 chapter 13 . 3/20/2011
I like that Michelle went and got her nails done with her mom, because I'd kinda felt sorry for her mom, and Michelle probably feels better having talked about it. :P

I liked the cliffhangery ending, because it's exciting and cliffhangery! :D I bet it was Desmond helping her up, right? Was it? Well, I'll probably find out when I read the next chapter. :P

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Rainbow35 chapter 12 . 3/20/2011
I love the way Desmond was immediately on Michelle's side, because it's kinda weird. It makes me wonder if his relationship with Megan had been fake, or if he'd secretly liked Michelle, or something.

I also like the way Michelle fell asleep so quickly, even though she thought she'd be a bad person if she did, because it's kinda funny. :P

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Rainbow35 chapter 11 . 3/20/2011
Wow, I was not expecting Megan and Desmond to be together! Not at all! :/

I liked that Michelle beat up Megan though, 'cause Megan kinda deserved it for being so mean.

I liked it when Michelle said, "The following day I wallowed in self-pity.", because it's very honest and blunt. :P

I liked the way Michelle's mom reminded her to bring pepper spray, because it's funny, and it also kinda confirms that she's a paranoid/overly cautious person, when you combine it with the "Don't pick up any hobos!" thing from a while back. :)

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