Reviews for ONESHOT Critique my world
TheLastFireBender chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
this was rlli rlli cute i luvd it
Brightheart chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
the story is nice but the ending seems quite rushed.

i mean they were just strangers.
BrandiRose chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Very nice beginning to a story, I'm looking forward to reading more. But the kissing part in the very end... seemed a little rushed. I mean, they don't even know each other. :P Other than that, I'm really looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
je ne veux pas travailler chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Cute story, but I'd be PISSED if I lost my job cause of some guy haha. I like your writing style :)