Reviews for Troubled
TotalDramaKingdomHearts chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
This story was sad, but it had a beautiful tone to it. It was a great story, amazing. There really aren't any words to describe this. It is just one of the best stories i have ever read. Utter perfection. I loved every letter of it.
SCopySCat91 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Aw, this is so sad! I loved it, but it's so sad! Now, Sci-Fi isnt really my thing. I actually have to struggle through most of it, but this seemed more angsty (my dream genre!) then sci-fi-ey so I was really fascinated!
MentalBrink chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Throwning readers right in the middle of something where the they are ignorant is always a fun read!
GriLl0ws chapter 1 . 1/24/2011

Aw i loved this story it made me cry at the end :( so sad but it sounds like real life for someone that is thinking about ending their life.

I hope to read more from you soon and I hope to update my own story soon too :) just trying to think of a good chapter :) hehehe


Punslinger chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
That was very sad, but well written. I hope you'll explain why Arissa did it.

Your dialogue is good, but I felt that there is too much of it. Some careful cutting might make the story move faster.