Reviews for Chasing a Wisp
Dragon-Rider II chapter 20 . 3/26/2012
HOLY FUZZ.

FORGOT ALL ABOUT THIS.

BAD ME. *Slaps self*

Wow. So Valence, on top of being a massive bum-rag who hates butterflies, now wants to KILL our resident Winnie?

Brief interjection- you are fantabulous at describing places.

Reverse?

Wait, is Winnie's secret name... Reverse?

(So, I guess this is a completely stupid time for me to get on my knees and beg for an update because I should've reviewed... *counts* SEVEN? months ago, and I sort of didn't until now.)

(*Gets on knees*)
Dragon-Rider II chapter 19 . 7/4/2011
Kick the d-

*Snort* HAHAHAHAHA! :D

Now, because I skipped to the author's note (again)... Les Miserables. Sounds French. :P

Haha. It doesn't take THAT much effort to die in a play, does it? I mean, apart from the whole staying still and...

Eh. I never acted before. Ignore me. :P

NO WINNIE YOU SILLY GIRL! Get back inside! THE CAPTURE-RS! Would you like to be a CAPTUREE? GET BACK INSIDE! :O

Haha, Winnie called him her dad? :3

HAHA! Evil Valence dude! That guy's a... [insert swear word here]. Seriously, he leads us on by thinking he's cool because he likes gears, then he kills the butterflies and THEN he tries and captures Winnie when she was RIGHT [Beep]ING THERE! ... I think he'll blame it on... the fact that it would've looked... suspicious if he locked Winnie up in their little Regular lace of Living. :P

WOO! Next chapter is chapter 20! :D We all know what this means, right? If you had 5 cents for every chapter... you'd have a DOLLAR by the next chapter! :D Would be an awesome way to make money, no? :P Shame it doesn't work.
Dragon-Rider II chapter 18 . 7/4/2011
I HAVE NOT BEEN KILLED BY A TORNADO!

I HAVE, however, been plagued with school work and life. D:

... OK, so I skipped to the end of the chapter and read the author's note. Now I will actually read the chapter.

... :O The story tellers gamble and drink! (I'm pretty sure you mentioned there's o alcohol there, but EH!)

THIS IS NO SAFE PLACE! THIS IS A PUB! SPARTAAA! :D

... But the old medicines are always suspicious... :P

... I WILL find out what your name means!

BELIEEEEVEE ITTT!
Dragon-Rider II chapter 17 . 7/4/2011
REVIEWING!

REVIEWING!

It has been ages, and I feel evil. :(

... and I realised my last review ends with '*Goes off to read next chapter*' ... *Shifts uncomfortably*

But yes. I shall review.

... ooh, pancakes.

WOO! DOGTAGS! Missing identities! General awesome stuff! :D

... last chapter mapped out. D:

This is one of the stories you want to keep on going.

With butterflies and dog tags.
Dragon-Rider II chapter 16 . 6/4/2011
I'M HERE! I SWEARS!

*Points at school*

BLAME THAT MONSTER THERE!

*Sniffs*

*Goes to read chapter*

Yes, I understand Winnie's point about bad grammar. *Shudders*

Woah.

POSSIBLE SIBLINGS?

Mind. Blown.

PLOTTY-PLOTTY-PLOT-NESS.

YAY! :D

*Goes off to read next chapter.*
Dragon-Rider II chapter 15 . 5/21/2011
HOORAY FOR UPDATES! :D (Even though I was being bad and didn't review the last chapter quickly... *Hangs head in shame*)

Yes, Winnie. I believe you are targeted. (*Mutters under breath about Valence and evil crazy people*)

Hmm...

IS BERT EVIL?

I BET BERT TURNED EVIL and is secretly working with Valence the Butterfly-Killer and Bert disappeared and there's gonna be some crazy stuff happening and... *Takes deep breath*

Good night, Jake.

*Goes off to eat breakfast*
Dragon-Rider II chapter 14 . 5/21/2011
*Hangs head in shame*

*Extremely delayed review begins now-

Haha. Looks like a certain someone was gambling... (*Shifty sideglance at Neil and Friends*)

...

GASP VALENCE IS EVIL I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT! D: THE BUTTERFLY MURDERER! *Growls*

...

Lot of theories buzzing around at the moment. Can't pinpoint tem, though.

I will guess your name.

And yes. *Shoots down FP* STUPID THING! (No-one cares about your updating to catch up to Fanfic. net! [they even match logos!] And they have a BOOKMARK feature which you can't even add stories to! D:)

GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR END OF YEAR EXAMS :D
Bob-The-Rock chapter 15 . 5/21/2011
HOORAY FOR QUICKER-THAN-USUAL UPDATES!

I thought that they were gonna explain stuff here. aww...

when is exciting stuffs gonna happen? please tell me. pleasepleaseplease...

Is Jake gonna die?
Bob-The-Rock chapter 14 . 5/16/2011
STOOPID FICTIONPRESS! IF IT WASNT SO STOOPID I COULDVE READ THIS CHAPTER THREE DAYS AGO!

I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENED WITH VALENCE!

I know you're not gonna tell me until it comes up in the story, but I must ask...

...was it the butterflies?

It would make sense if it was. I've got many theories bouncing around in my head, but I cant be stuffed typing them now.

ah well.

oh, btw, I didnt think you were dead. I swear. I was SO not planning your funeral when you were gone. *nervous laugh*

I am now in awe...MY DAD IS ACTUALLY WASHING THE DISHES! can you BELIEVE that?

update soon!

(I'm still working on the penname thing. I'm also failing)
Dragon-Rider II chapter 13 . 5/6/2011
OK I DIDN'T REVIEW SO SHOOT ME.

...On second thoughts... nah.

I agree with Bobby-chan! (You're probably wondering who Bobbo the Dragonfly is... he was a dead dragonfly we found on a cafeteria table. Then we buried him.)

She found her friends! *Throws party* But if something strange doesn't happen I will POKE thee.

...

I LEARNT A BIT OF FRENCH TODAY AND I FEELS SMART! :D

OOH! So THAT'S what a TR Puppet is! :D (I feel stupid now... seems blindingly obvious... sigh...)

I WILL guess what your name is. JUST WATCH. *Stares at pen name*
Bob-The-Rock chapter 13 . 4/30/2011
YAY! she finally found her friends! but wasnt the way she found them just a leetle t convenient...?

unless theyre just figments of her imagination. or holograms created by the butterfly woman.

By the way KATE, it's bobby-chan, NOT bobbo. bobbo was the dead dragonfly. dont disrespect the dead.

that reminds me...my dad put some sort of insect poison thing outide, and now there is a whole pile of dead ants there. im hoping it wont stink up like the dragonfly did.

i have yet to figure out what your name means. it has eight numbers...maybe your phone number (pft. dumbest guess ever)

uh...your name spelled in numbers. or your age times 60 minus 3 divided by 9 and multiplied by 4, plus 9.

*checks* that would mean that you're... 15624438.8 years old. wait...what?

it is obvious i used a calculator for that. i aint THAT smart.

okay, ive gotten off track.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Dragon-Rider II chapter 12 . 4/13/2011
Ok...

First off, the reason I didn't review this before was because FP was being stupid.

Second, 'Course you're forgiven! Duh.

Hmm...

IF THEY GET CAPTURED what's going to happen?

The woman sounds decent for some reason... I dunno why, but she does.

And deep down, she can make somebody crack up.

But anyway.

Bobbo's theory sounds... eh... interesting? (WHAT IF SHE WAS ACTUALLY A SHAPE-SHIFTING BUTTERFLY?)

Bye!

PS. I still didn't figure out shat your pen name means. I'll stare at it for ten minutes and see if I get anything...
Jennifer Noel chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
-Cocks head to side- Why is it the worst mistake? Hm...I hope I get to find out. I like how you described how the characters where, but didn't really say what they look like yet. I like it so far and it's got me interested. Keep it up please! ;)
Bob-The-Rock chapter 12 . 4/13/2011
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!

you're awesome. and i beat DR2 in reviewing. i think. so haw haw.

so...whats happening next?

and I'm trying to figure out why your penname is 15624459. and i have failed. unless it has something to do with butterflies?

wait a second...I've got a new theory about the butterflies!

The woman doesn't REALLY know her friends...she was sent by the butterflies! and because butterflies are pretty, cute, and NOT suspicious, they follow you around everywhere, seemingly innocent, when really, THEY KNOW ALL YOUR SECRETS.

*gasps*

and she was sent because the butterflies have an evil plan to dominate the world, so they're gathering info and "eliminating" any possible threats. SO, because Winnie and Ryan could be a threat, shes gonna take them into the woods and KILL 'EM.

haw haw.
Bob-The-Rock chapter 11 . 3/20/2011
ah well, at least you updated. shows that you're actually planning on finishing the story and not abandoning it without notice like SOME PEOPLE I COULD MENTION (but won't)

anyways, since there is nothing in this chapter that i can use to prove my butterfly theory any further, ima skip that till the next chapter (whenever that is), but mark my words, IM GONNA PROVE THAT TEH BUTTERFLY THEORY IS RIGHT!

even if this IS a fictional story...

he spent a long time on his hair? he STYLES it? don't tell me he styles it like justin bieber or something.

NO! SCHOOL! i feel for you. it's like it gets worse every year...

anyways, TRY to update soon. cos i said so. not really. please?
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