|Reviews for Tomorrow|
| TripleMelody chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I really love your style of writing. You express things so elegantly and beautifully, and your writing has a lovely natural rhythm that makes the words just flow together.
This poem is really beautiful, and I especially love the second stanza.
| bewareoftheturtles chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Your poems are great. I am so new to writing poetry.
Your poems inspire me.
Could this have been an internet love?
| jbarfield chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
There are few true artists/authors who can capture a person with just such few words left in this world. But you, my friend, have surpassed that! Keep up the great poems! I look forward to seeing more! (:
| Twyla Cole chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
I love this. Your repetition is lovely and very effectively used. Perhaps depicting a relationship that was tiresome or stretched too thin? But at the same time you are being one of those lovers who will take what there is to take from a past relationship and not discount it for whatever has happened.
Love piece. lovely idea.