Reviews for Tomorrow
TripleMelody chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I really love your style of writing. You express things so elegantly and beautifully, and your writing has a lovely natural rhythm that makes the words just flow together.

This poem is really beautiful, and I especially love the second stanza.

Melody :)
bewareoftheturtles chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Your poems are great. I am so new to writing poetry.

Your poems inspire me.

Could this have been an internet love?
jbarfield chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
There are few true artists/authors who can capture a person with just such few words left in this world. But you, my friend, have surpassed that! Keep up the great poems! I look forward to seeing more! (:
Twyla Cole chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
I love this. Your repetition is lovely and very effectively used. Perhaps depicting a relationship that was tiresome or stretched too thin? But at the same time you are being one of those lovers who will take what there is to take from a past relationship and not discount it for whatever has happened.

Love piece. lovely idea.

Truly,

Twyla