|Reviews for as the room got darker, the whites|
| Twyla Cole chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
This was very engaging. This is one that I would need to read over and over to pull every last bit of meaning out of it. It flowed very nicely with surprising changes in rhythm every now and then. I loved the repetition of "white" and the way you started lines at the end of the previous line. It made it a little disorienting, but very effective.
I wonder if the crash would bigger and harder...just a thought.