Reviews for New York City
xxLovelessly Yoursxx chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
so great. perfectly describes the ny. nice :)
bethiee chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
this is a really great poem! i've always wanted to visit nyc!

i love how you've incorporated the well-known names for new york, 'the apple' and 'the city that never sleeps'

just lovely :)
xOneLastingImpressionx chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
New York City is such a lovely city, and this I know from personal experience. I think you really capture NYC in this poem and being able to describe something as grand and extravagant as New York City in one poem or just one chapter can be hard to do. It flows very nicely, by the way. I liked it. :)
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
"All of the people on top,

The skyscrapers,

All the people underneath,

The subways," - *love* that structure and diction.

"symphony of emotion,

they are the pulse of the city" - love that too.

i like your conclusions and suspicions of people.
kljhlkkjhug chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Awesome poem, pays true homage to our nations biggest city.