Reviews for Ridiculous
pllx chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
The poem picked up around the

second and third stanzas, hit us

a little

harder, and was more enticing. Still,

good, good poem.
Jason Daniels chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
nicely done, 8/10

seems like theres some backstory thats missing. not that it needs to be long just feels like there should be something before it.


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