Reviews for Under His Mercy
victoria03 chapter 7 . 10/9/2011
uuu.. can't wait to read about their honeymoon :)
romancelove20 chapter 6 . 10/6/2011
you know that happened with me too. People like sick obesssion more than High school servant but I'm still going to write them all. I don't want the stories to have an ending even if it's a rushed ending. I think you could finish this story in three or four chapters :) It's a good story
Jasmine951 chapter 6 . 9/30/2011
I really like your stories can you please update vengeance!good chapter :)
MademoiselleS chapter 6 . 9/29/2011
I really like this story and hope you continue writing it.
Annalisa89 chapter 6 . 9/29/2011
Maybe now they will understand each others a little better. I'm so happy that you have written this chap! post soon love
Jensi chapter 6 . 9/28/2011
I am still reading this, and I will check out your others as well. I like this, and I appreciate the darkness of it. I would suggest more inner turmoil on her part, given the situation. I don't think that it would be totally unrealistic for her to want him on some level, but he also has been very cruel to her and that has to bother her. Add some of that in as you go on, and I am very curious to see what happens. Good job so far!
somebody who loves your FF chapter 5 . 9/12/2011
salut! vous etes magnifique! vraiment! j'adore vos fanfictions!

continuez cette histoire! s'il vous plait! ah! je ne suis pas francais mais j'apprends le francais maintenant (j'ai oblie comment epeler le mot "now" en francais XD)

ah ah! et a pros votre histoire! c'est cruel mais sexy, c'est sombre mais beau. votre grammaire est bonne aussi! ne t'inquite pas! aidez-moi avec ma grammaire en francais XDDDD
Annalisa89 chapter 5 . 8/18/2011
I really like this fic..please continue it!
victoria03 chapter 5 . 7/20/2011
you are doing a great job. Can't wait for more:) Really.. you are one of my fav:) Btw, did you get my pm?
victoria03 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
we miss you here, even though it's been a couple of days.. both stories are great. update soon, pretty please:)
victoria03 chapter 4 . 7/4/2011
i adore your story. it's very good. :0 i can't wait to see what happens next si please update as soon as you can:) pretty please:)
The Phoenix Girl chapter 4 . 6/27/2011
He LOVES her!in his own possessive twisted way...i don't know why i made him lose control that way! i've written the plot of this story a long time ago and he just came to me like that. i think Jason is very realistic, every man who ends up having his partner running away from him on their wedding night, especially after she convinced him that she likes him would go crazy.

well jason wanted to hurt her so she would feel the way he's feeling, and the only weapon he had in the middle of the forest was his **** ... you got my idea :D
vernie chapter 4 . 6/27/2011
why did he do that! i thought he loved her? he's very cruel.
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