Reviews for Loyal Love
racethedreamx chapter 4 . 3/8/2011
Ahh! Sorry it's taken me a little long to read the fourth chapter. I was wondering if Brandon would ever find out, I'm kind of glad he knows now. I really didn't want him to go on not finding out, until Lane finally told him or something. Aw, really? Basically there is only two more chapters? :( I love your writing so much, that I don't like when it comes to an end!
RT chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
Despite all the cliched, cringe-worthy "I love you" statements and overall sappiness of the teenage romance in this story, I actually like it. I want to know what's going to happen next, so I'll continue to read.
racethedreamx chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
Oh, interesting. It's different to read compared to your previous stories. Almost a little bit dark, so to speak. Lane suddenly leaving and not telling Brandon, I wonder what she is so scared about. I wonder if Brandon is like the jock of high school, that a baby could ruin his "reputation". I'm liking this a lot! (:
racethedreamx chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Aw, this is so cute. Already Lane is a favorite. She reminds me a lot of myself, before I was comfortable with the kitchen. Can't wait to see what you have in store next for this. Keep writing! (:
Ashleyismy1 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Very realistic. I like it a lot and as always I want to see what twists you can put in...girl you really just need to finish one of these because you definitely could get published...jussayin' :)