Reviews for The Safest Place in the Universe
Jave Harron chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
This story seems more like a summary, and a rather boring one at that. If this is some sort of history for a fictional universe, that's one thing, but this is just rattling off a bunch of numbers and (lacking) descriptions of a (presumably) huge battle. Needs quite a bit of improvement if this is anything more than a short history.