Reviews for Watch Me Burn
ryoish chapter 5 . 11/6/2016
I really like it! Please update! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 4/2/2016
Is this abandoned?
Guest chapter 5 . 12/19/2014
I sure hope this story is not adandon! I check often for updates and hope to find one! You have very interesting story and I hope we get to read more!
emerelle chapter 5 . 10/29/2014
This story is really good, the characters are very well written. I would love to see more of Ryker and his addiction to Malachi. Hope you'll update soon!
guest chapter 3 . 10/28/2014
This story looks very interesting. I really hope you continue with this story. I would love to read more of Malachi an Ryker:)
morningstorm70 chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
OK need another. Chapter
Necromancer15 chapter 5 . 1/7/2014
I love this story so much, I really hope you decide to update soon!
Talysse chapter 5 . 12/10/2013
Are you sure it's not a happy relation, hard yes, but not so terrible, between their?
And mother of Malachi? Wwhere is she?
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2013
Aha.. I love these kind of story .. I hope there will be some kind of stockholm syndrome bond ;-;
Its beautifully written. I can't wait for the next update
firefox vixen chapter 5 . 11/6/2013
I REALLY want to read more!
thecowonthebox chapter 5 . 10/8/2013
I feel really sorry for poor Malachi ! T.T
I hope your going to write more soon... Thank you !
Love all your stories.
Starryeyed chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
I have no idea why I'm reading this... It's good concept but I know full well that I'm just going to be disappointed ahah.. Cos these men are horrible and Are not going to be nice to the boys like ever .. Never be normal and yea the fact defeat is too easy arrghh it annoying cos I love/hate the story cos the idea is good but it's not going to end up being happy etc hmm :(
bonky jo chapter 4 . 6/11/2013
This was...intense?! I guess that's how i would describe it... First of all, the warden is an extreme douche bag and I don't think I can find any redeeming qualities in him. Why on earth does he treat his son like crap. And to Tibi, he screwed him right? (I'm not misinterpreting something am I?). He's just an all around douche.

On another note how Ryker treats Malachi is different... At first I thought Ryker was completely heartless, but maybe he just lacks self control? I mean it doesn't excuse what he did to Malachi, but at least I sort of understand him. The short POV switches you have are really helpful in giving a glimpse into his head. And it was so cute that he cooked for Malachi.

Anyways now I'm just curious of what will happen with Tibi x Adrik?! Like sheesh he came alone to rescue Malachi and then gets captured himself smh. At least it's a given that Tibi and Malachi are bound to cross paths soon... I'm ager for your next update! Can't wait :-p
Encore19 chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
This story was a lot smaller than the others, but maybe you intend to update it with more soon?
Encore19 chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
I really am enjoying this so far. Yes it is dark, but I like that element.
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