Hey, don't worry. U'll also have a happy ending. Trust me. And u're very right, u shouldn't give up cuz u know y? Bcuz (I'm speaking with experience) if u love, or even like, some1, tht person will love, or like u eventually. Tht person notices you the time u notice him/her, for all v know. Believe me. I've tried the job of a match maker at my school. Gosh, it was a huge success. Turns out all the ppl's crush liked them back, except for one and I still haven't figured out y. So as I said, don't give up.

Plus, I don't believe tht this is ur first one-shot. This is so gud. U should keep writing one-shots AND stories. If u start writing stories, FINISH them off. Okay? I do NOT want another of my story alerts being at the down of my list wondering whether their authors remember those stories? Gosh, I'm blabbering.

Write more stories.

Love ya.

GooD-LucK!

loved it. very good:D

WOW!

This is SO good!

I love it! :)

It left butterflies in my stomach,

Poor Logan though. :(

It was like a fantasy!hahahha! :)

Anyway, good work! :)

Mayunn! You don't accept anonymous reviews and i had to shed my layer of laziness and sign in! But no matter (:

I just want to say that i love your story. It's got a nice chronicle of events, it's light, fresh and enjoyable. Good job!

The only thing that i thought was a bit off was when charlie said that he'd loved her ever since he heard his mom talk about her. A bit unrealistic, dontcha think?

But other than that, great story, i hope to hear more from you! :D

extend into a full story :DDD this was greattt!

hey there ;] i just wanted to let you know that you did a phenomenal job on your first one-shot. what i really liked was the detail you put into skye and charlie's progression through childhood to adolescence. maybe it's because you based skye on yourself, but it felt very real to me and reminded me of my own bumbling childhood, haha. if you think you can pull off extending it into a full blown story, go for it. you might learn some things about yourself along the way :]

hehehe! I liked it, a very cute one shot. I don't normally like the whole theme that spreads out over grades/lives kinda stuff, but this one was an exception! x)

btw, in answer to your 'ps',I think you should keep it as a one shot, it was very sweet and satisfying as it was. :D

Haha yes, 'Skye' is a very cool name.

I really like how you broke the course of this story into the phases of her life. It was really descriptive and showed how our characteristics change over time.

I also thought your characters were very believable and fun to read about! Great work! (:

x mandy

~Courtesy review marathon, link in my profile

OHMAN! (

THIS WAS REALLY GOOD. hahaha since skye has charlie. i shall now call dibs on LOGAN (;

Aww...

THIS IS CUTE.

keep it a one-shot. I like the way it ended.

It was perfect.

and only 2 reviews?

That's not fair. Good stuffs like this SHOULDN'T be so uner-reviewed.

XD

Very cute. I think you should leave it as a one shot before it gets super complicated like mine. There were only a couple of typos but I liked it. :)

Well I think that you should blow this up into a bigger story :) hopefully you do :D

Now, THAT was pretty awesome and made my night! :3 AWESOME one-shot, and I really did enjoy it and loved it :]