I love your story

What the heck, I was totally blindsided by this. There were actual tears while I read in the car ( which had my brother giving me very odd looks). Such a fabulous, cute but in depth oneshot. Just the best. Xx

That. That ending. I nearly drowned in my own "stupid sensitive girl tears".

absolutely heart warming and cheesy but in a good way c: loved it!

Insert "Daw" here. I loved it! Probably cheesy, yes, but your writing was clean and formatted nicely. I love Mario Kart! Not so much ponies, though, sorry... lol.

hahha dis is fablous hayee i just cant get enough of dis stry beautifully written ever so nice :)

TEARS OF JOY, with a little twist of heartache. :

I know this is my second time reviewing this story. I actually had to logout because aparently you can't review the same chapter twice :s

So not to be a stalker or anything bt... I freakin LOVE this story! Seriously, it's the best one-shot I've ever read. I wish I could write like you.

Are you ever gonna write another story? The world could benefit from more cheese.

:D

Your biggest fan, hotcheri.

I love this little letter/story - you have a real knack for writing. Your formatting flowed nicely, too, which I really liked. This is, like, my fourth time reading this, I believe.

Also, I'm pretty sure you already know, but I found this through the one-shots community. Congrats on getting on the list!

That was fantastic! I love how it was so dramatic, and yet it wasn't overly depressing. And the ending was fantastic. Thank you for the entertaining read!

Liz

honestly, this was one of the first few stories i read when i came to fp without an account last year. i'm glad that it was. stories like this make me wanna write better and make improve my style of writing. (:

i love how the mood shifts from segment to segment, it makes the story super vivid. and you have details and everyth in every segment, it doesnt feel like a story, it feels like i can see everyth happening in front of me like i'm watching a movie.

and the story's so sweet! its like a roller coaster of emotions, and you feel the pain and the happiness and the hurt and the... and the.. and the... *implodes*

so, ehem... cool story, bro. )

That was excellent. I love the format that you did it it. At first I thought it was just a really odd blend of first and second person, but then about halfway through I realized that it would make more sense if it was a letter.

Anyway, it was great. (I honestly only opened it because the summary said MarioKart. I LOVE THAT GAME. Even though, hilariously enough, I don't own a Wii and can only play it at my best friend's house. Life's little coincidences.) It had a lot of feeling in it, despite the unusual (but not bad, definitely not bad) way it was written. Honestly, I thought the letter part was more well written than the third-person part.

Very nice fic. )

OMG this is by far one of the most amazing and touching stories ive ever read ! it was really somthing and although you say that its filled with ots of cheese :P i loved every second of it ! thankyou for writing it it was truly amazing 3

I found your story from that community. HAHAHAHHA.

I've never played Mario, but you make me feel like I should! And I love the twist of the story, because I didn't really expect it to be a letter, and it just made it so... sad. And of course, loved the part where they finally got their happily ever after. :)

I really loved this. Wonderful storytelling and No, lol, not too much cheese. And even if it was, i think it was necessary to make this as touching as it was. Nice work!