Reviews for Life Isn't a Video Game
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
I love your story
hermechanicalcookiejar chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
What the heck, I was totally blindsided by this. There were actual tears while I read in the car ( which had my brother giving me very odd looks). Such a fabulous, cute but in depth oneshot. Just the best. Xx
Ginbrat chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
That. That ending. I nearly drowned in my own "stupid sensitive girl tears".
foreternity chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
absolutely heart warming and cheesy but in a good way c: loved it!
Germany chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Insert "Daw" here. I loved it! Probably cheesy, yes, but your writing was clean and formatted nicely. I love Mario Kart! Not so much ponies, though, sorry... lol.
heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
hahha dis is fablous hayee i just cant get enough of dis stry beautifully written ever so nice :)
bubblygirl027 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
TEARS OF JOY, with a little twist of heartache. :
hotcheri chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I know this is my second time reviewing this story. I actually had to logout because aparently you can't review the same chapter twice :s

So not to be a stalker or anything bt... I freakin LOVE this story! Seriously, it's the best one-shot I've ever read. I wish I could write like you.

Are you ever gonna write another story? The world could benefit from more cheese.


Your biggest fan, hotcheri.
obijuankenobi chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I love this little letter/story - you have a real knack for writing. Your formatting flowed nicely, too, which I really liked. This is, like, my fourth time reading this, I believe.

Also, I'm pretty sure you already know, but I found this through the one-shots community. Congrats on getting on the list!
Anara Celebvilya chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
That was fantastic! I love how it was so dramatic, and yet it wasn't overly depressing. And the ending was fantastic. Thank you for the entertaining read!

NinjaDanceParty chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
honestly, this was one of the first few stories i read when i came to fp without an account last year. i'm glad that it was. stories like this make me wanna write better and make improve my style of writing. (:

i love how the mood shifts from segment to segment, it makes the story super vivid. and you have details and everyth in every segment, it doesnt feel like a story, it feels like i can see everyth happening in front of me like i'm watching a movie.

and the story's so sweet! its like a roller coaster of emotions, and you feel the pain and the happiness and the hurt and the... and the.. and the... *implodes*

so, ehem... cool story, bro. )
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
That was excellent. I love the format that you did it it. At first I thought it was just a really odd blend of first and second person, but then about halfway through I realized that it would make more sense if it was a letter.

Anyway, it was great. (I honestly only opened it because the summary said MarioKart. I LOVE THAT GAME. Even though, hilariously enough, I don't own a Wii and can only play it at my best friend's house. Life's little coincidences.) It had a lot of feeling in it, despite the unusual (but not bad, definitely not bad) way it was written. Honestly, I thought the letter part was more well written than the third-person part.

Very nice fic. )
yazzay chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
OMG this is by far one of the most amazing and touching stories ive ever read ! it was really somthing and although you say that its filled with ots of cheese :P i loved every second of it ! thankyou for writing it it was truly amazing 3
found.eventually chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I found your story from that community. HAHAHAHHA.

I've never played Mario, but you make me feel like I should! And I love the twist of the story, because I didn't really expect it to be a letter, and it just made it so... sad. And of course, loved the part where they finally got their happily ever after. :)
Fragile Things chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
I really loved this. Wonderful storytelling and No, lol, not too much cheese. And even if it was, i think it was necessary to make this as touching as it was. Nice work!
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