|Reviews for Stepping on Spiders: A Petite Tragedy|
| BookcraZzaY chapter 14 . 10/24/2011
Such sad ones
:( je deteste it!
| BookcraZzaY chapter 13 . 9/24/2011
| BookcraZzaY chapter 12 . 9/7/2011
The life of an teenager I guesss...haha I'm one though
Very very deep
| BookcraZzaY chapter 11 . 9/4/2011
Very deep poem the placement of words made it have depth and supense...(: I really like how every subject just leads to anther one in this so smoothly
Fantastic poem :D
| peppermint latte chapter 11 . 8/15/2011
This said a lot. I just couldn't identify why I found it so damn powerful.
| punctured.lungs chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
this is beautiful.
| BookcraZzY chapter 11 . 7/24/2011
I can feel the emptiness in this-I don't know how you come up with it
Being artificial for example never would have thought of that
You go to greet lengths to make things deep
| hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
very nice beginning. i definitely adore the last lymn. powerful.
| hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 10 . 7/12/2011
This is so powerful and beautiful. It hits a depth.
I'll now go and read this from the beginning.
| BookcraZzaY chapter 10 . 6/22/2011
I like that it kind of takes on the side of arguing with ones self
Like the two parts in cartoon
A conscious that's what it's called
Both parts are so convincing though
So I'm going with not evil side (:
There really deep poems or stanzas but yeah loved them (:
| Pavane chapter 10 . 6/3/2011
If I could "like" this poem, I would. It's short and sweet and gets to the point with beautiful economy of words. Brilliant.
| recycle rhymes chapter 9 . 5/22/2011
love how the structure made me really wonder and look for double meanings. Nice work :)
| BookcraZzaY chapter 9 . 5/6/2011
It's almost dark enough to bring down my really happy mood :)
Amazing poetry structure it adds so much supense
Beautiful yet dark of course :)
Loved it :D-:) •_'- :D
| Bonjour Skitty chapter 8 . 3/23/2011
This is an interesting collection. I enjoy the format and how each chapter tells its own story, despite being part of a collective as well.
| recycle rhymes chapter 7 . 3/23/2011
I love the formatting of this piece