Reviews for Looking
Evilives chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
Here at last!

Stalker (you've made it a name) here is actually more endearing than creepy. I love this POV...

I could SEE the Stalker's smile at the end!
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Beautiful... it's the only word i can use to describe this poem
Dramira chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
This is really well done. I like the part "like damp velvet brushing against my skin" very much!
Evilives chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I like the stream of consciouness...and how he/she switches between being nervous and eager.

Would a continuation be too much to ask? :/
Melancholy Wanderer chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I love the way you describe anxiety. "Like damp velvet" was my favorite simile