Its really god I love it! A little grammar errors but thats about it

love itt (:

LOVE! please update soon ((:

I hope you plan on posting soon, caus eit is going to drive mr crazy if you don't...

i like it. please update soon ((:

lovee it. please update soon ((:

Alright, so this story is very good, however, I do believe that you should re-read the beginning and fix where it says:

""Alisa, you're needed. A student's computer broke down." Alisa sighed and picked up her bag as the teacher waited patiently. "Alright." She picked up her bag and followed the teacher out of the computer lab. It seemed like she was the one fixing everything, day and night. She never really had time to go anywhere when they had breaks, because by that time, several computers would be broken."

In it, you stated that she picked her bag up twice.

Also, most dialogs (time they speak), after what was said it wasn't clarified who said it clearly and that is a very important thing that needs to be done, so you should maybe work on fixing that.

Other then those small errors, it was very good. You got spunk kid, keep it up!

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!

it's good and it reminds me of this anime i watched...

kinda... i guess

maybe.. idk

i guess it just does

xD PLZ CONTINUE UR STORY!

IT'S SO GOOD!

YAYAYAYAYAYAY!

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-misaki

i love itt ((: please update ASAP! ((: