|Reviews for Beauties of the Sky|
| Second Hand Screams chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
I like this concept, and you have some really strong images in here, but it's really convoluted. Try simplifying it a bit. Your sentences need to flow more, right now they seem to spill and rush into each other. Great start to what could be a really good piece, makes me remember flying over the Atlantic. Love the last few lines.
Thanks for reviewing :)
| Sakura Reyna chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Wow...this reminds me of a video that was broadcast on Nickeleodeon when I was little, around the time that the new millennium was approaching...It's a simple little song called "Is it really real?" by Nina Persson and it talks alot about using your imagination...it's one of the best things about being a writer, actually, we really don't lose the power to imagine things, especially what you've opened up about the sky here.
| samhus chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Wow it is so true. I really like it; very descripted. Thanks for posting. oh...Please check out my stoires and PLEASE