At first, I wasn't really sure that I liked it, but by the third paragraph, you had me hooked. I love your style! Usually I don't like so much description, but the way you wrote it, it was practically poetry, and it worked brilliantly. The story is absolutely adorable.

The only bad thing about it is that it's a one shot and I want more!

That was an absolutely adorable short story. Your main character is stalkerish, which definitely reminds me of myself. She's awkward and I like the way she told the story, (which obviously you wrote so basically I like the way your wrote it; the way she repeated herself made it seem like she was trying to completely commit it to memory and it was sort of like a prose. Also the ending was perfect with the whole "What's your favorite color?" thing. He said "Green," which are the color of her eyes and she said, "Brown," which are the color of his eyes, so cute. I caught only two things, most likely typos, well I completely forgot the first one but in the seond to last paragraph you forgot the "e" in "spite". So yeah, basically I just wanted to let you know that I liked it :D