Reviews for Blood Prince |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the story ...well is ok but spellings are horible |
![]() ![]() ![]() terrible spelling .yeesh |
![]() ![]() Arrggh! Misstypes I ment to put a 'don't' between the 'I' and' want' in the last comment "I don't want...". Man, I think someone trying to put a curse on me!(Tries to take shelter) |
![]() ![]() Why do I get a vib that you like to make others wait. I want to sound mean or anything, it's just a feeling I'm getting. Well update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is so much fun to read, cuz you never know what is going to happen next!:]! HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES SOON! 'Cuz i can't wait. Oh and i like in the ending of this chapter instead of being embarrassed she just plain out said that he is the best kiss she got:} |
![]() ![]() Yay you updated. It's was getting really steamy in this chapter, and I also liked how xavior was fighting off his demon half |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very lovely. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mad at you...Grrr. you took forever to update...Its okay though :] I DID have to go back the the friggen begining, just to see what this was...But it took 2.5 seconds for me to remember, and then I was back to reading it. :D Hehe. Anyways, Im glad your back! :D Yeah. So bye now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say that the beginning was confusing. With the lack of names and descriptions, it was hard to tell who was who while reading the same pronouns for the 4 guys. And there wasn't a smooth transition between the points of views. There were also some grammatical errors (ex. affect vs effect and various puncuation mistakes), but not enough for me to dislike the chapter- not at all. I'm even more interested now. I've taken a liking to the characters, and I can't wait to see what will happen next. I also liked reading in Xavier's POV. Sometimes he seems a bit juvenile for a 300-plus-year-old vampire prince, but getting into his mind and seeing his struggle concerning the girl was cool. Now now, I'm off to the next chapter! :) ~ MidniteLayce |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story seems pretty interesting so far. I could see the scenes well in my mind, and the plot intrigues me. I like the idea of a creator of soul mates; I haven't really seen that before. Needless to say, I'm excited to see them when they finally meet, so I'm off to read the second chapter. :) ~ MidniteLayce |
![]() ![]() i like it...but why arent you updating? its crushing me :( |
![]() ![]() please please please keep writing! i luv this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gossh.. I like the sunblock stuff xD Haha, its cool. Yea. I hope he doesnt hurt her O.o I mean, that would totally suck for him... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my. This is awesome! Gosh! I mean...wow. The black/purple string...and the girl. And the old guy! And Xavier! One question, is it Xavier, like the Mexican version of Xavier? If that makes sense...Haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful! I am absolutely adoring all of this! Please do update soon :) The detailing of every single thing was great :D |