Reviews for Blood Prince
bugula2009 chapter 6 . 2/25/2012
the story ...well is ok but spellings are horible
bugula2009 chapter 4 . 2/25/2012
terrible spelling .yeesh
a chapter 17 . 9/16/2011
Arrggh! Misstypes I ment to put a 'don't' between the 'I' and' want' in the last comment "I don't want...". Man, I think someone trying to put a curse on me!(Tries to take shelter)
a chapter 17 . 9/16/2011
Why do I get a vib that you like to make others wait. I want to sound mean or anything, it's just a feeling I'm getting. Well update soon!
VampBUNNIES chapter 17 . 7/30/2011
Your story is so much fun to read, cuz you never know what is going to happen next!:]! HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES SOON! 'Cuz i can't wait. Oh and i like in the ending of this chapter instead of being embarrassed she just plain out said that he is the best kiss she got:}
Starlessknight123 chapter 17 . 7/28/2011
Yay you updated. It's was getting really steamy in this chapter, and I also liked how xavior was fighting off his demon half
quill.and.inkk chapter 17 . 7/27/2011
Very lovely.

Update soon!
bridgettblah chapter 17 . 7/26/2011
I mad at you...Grrr. you took forever to update...Its okay though :] I DID have to go back the the friggen begining, just to see what this was...But it took 2.5 seconds for me to remember, and then I was back to reading it. :D Hehe. Anyways, Im glad your back! :D Yeah. So bye now!
MidniteLayce chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
I have to say that the beginning was confusing. With the lack of names and descriptions, it was hard to tell who was who while reading the same pronouns for the 4 guys. And there wasn't a smooth transition between the points of views. There were also some grammatical errors (ex. affect vs effect and various puncuation mistakes), but not enough for me to dislike the chapter- not at all.

I'm even more interested now. I've taken a liking to the characters, and I can't wait to see what will happen next. I also liked reading in Xavier's POV. Sometimes he seems a bit juvenile for a 300-plus-year-old vampire prince, but getting into his mind and seeing his struggle concerning the girl was cool. Now now, I'm off to the next chapter! :)

~ MidniteLayce
MidniteLayce chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Your story seems pretty interesting so far. I could see the scenes well in my mind, and the plot intrigues me. I like the idea of a creator of soul mates; I haven't really seen that before. Needless to say, I'm excited to see them when they finally meet, so I'm off to read the second chapter. :)

~ MidniteLayce
SparklyDaisy chapter 15 . 5/14/2011
i like it...but why arent you updating? its crushing me :(
chicki chapter 16 . 5/7/2011
please please please keep writing! i luv this story
bridgettblah chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
Oh gossh.. I like the sunblock stuff xD Haha, its cool. Yea. I hope he doesnt hurt her O.o I mean, that would totally suck for him...
bridgettblah chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Oh my. This is awesome! Gosh! I The black/purple string...and the girl. And the old guy! And Xavier! One question, is it Xavier, like the Mexican version of Xavier? If that makes sense...Haha.
Ramar chapter 16 . 5/4/2011
This was beautiful! I am absolutely adoring all of this! Please do update soon :) The detailing of every single thing was great :D
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