Reviews for Fantasy
MADdreamers chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Wow, this is really good. I like the imagery you were able to put into this. Also, the "so close but so far away" idea is something relatable to most readers.
Campion41 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Great poem! I don't typically love poems, but this one is surprisingly good! It heads straight to the heart!
bethiee chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
this is amazing, especially considering it was written in only 8 minutes!
VioletMeloncholia chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Although I don't usually go for poems for that, I like yours, specifically because the desire in the character seems real.

She seems to want the person, and it's palpable. I like it. It's good. Keep writing.
Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This is so touching. I love it. Keep it up!
Archia chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
The line, "Your finger tips playing on my sleeve." made me envision the scene so much more, before it wasn't really anything, but that line made it something. After that line I started to really enjoy this, I got a descriptive picture with not many words.