Reviews for Faking It |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! Cute story! I love it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol the best nickname was snookums. This is such a good one shot loved it, you have talent! keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() adorable. max and candace are awesome characters, and since i love em so much and would love 2 read more about them i kinda wish it was a story, longer and crap. but one-shots are good 2D. love it all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! I loved it! It was so, cute, sweet and funny! I especially liked Kylie, she was so funny. "Gosh, he's sexy. Don't you think he's sexy? Of course you do." And: "I slept with Max" "You slut!" I also liked Candace's and Max's sarcastic remarks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good lord, you have a gift. Amazing. Please write more like this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mistakes! "-and wouldn't it look odd if you didn't bring you're boyfriend as you're date to a party?" Change the 'you're' to a 'your'! "You're looking quit delectable today," he said, while obviously leering at me. Quit is used when you want somebody to stop somebody... Quite is probably the word you were meant to use, right? - Still! It's cute and I liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! And OHMYGOD that thing Max says about falling into a pattern of insulting each other and not being able to change it even when you find out you like them? SO true! Anyways, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was absolutely adorable! I loved their banter (and your title) ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very cute, i really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable! Though I think I would have liked to see Stuart get what was coming to him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, I absolutely love Max! I love his humor and attitude-he's just so sweet. This is definitely one of my favorite oneshots! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awh! That was so cliche, perfect for my community! :) But I wished Stuart wasn't so nerdy.. like say he was good looking, could even be more good looking than Max. But since he's so rude and such a jerk that can't take a hint his looks don't matter. But overall it was a good light read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I mean... wow. I've just read all three of your stories, starting with Jellybeans and ending with this one, and all I can say is... wow. Normally I find that most authors only write one story that I really connect to or like but so far you can't seem to get things wrong. Your writing style and choice in content makes reading your stories so worth the time. Thanks for sharing your talent and posting these works for us to read. I can't wait to see what other stories you end up producing over the years as I can tell you have a natural gift for this stuff. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw :) I adored Max |
![]() ![]() ![]() They're just so cute! - What a cute story :) |